检查一下

marlon0511
June 11, 2011, 06:56 AM posted in General Discussion

你好老师,

麻烦你查一查这些句子吧:

*退票收多少手续费?(How much do you charge for returning a ticket?)

*我可以异地该沪售的车票。(I can change my Shanghai-bought train ticket in a different location.)

*你的东西都收拾完了,就出门等我好吗?(When you finish tidying your things up, you go outside and wait for me, OK?)

*他认为在这个盒子里找到他要的。。。但什么都没有。(He thought that he could find what he wanted in this box, but there was not a thing in it.)

*我们一起不能做这件事,要不请他们帮我们解决。(We cannot handle this matter together, why not request them to help us solve this.)

谢谢!

马隆

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grace_counselor
June 12, 2011, 12:44 PM

你好 马隆,

这是我修改的句子:

我可以异地该沪售的车票。——我可以异地沪售的车票。

他认为在这个盒子里找到他要的。。。——他以为在这个盒子里可以找到他要的……

祝好!

Grace

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marlon0511
June 12, 2011, 02:14 PM

老师你好,

谢谢你的帮忙。

马隆