Sentences for correction

srock222

April 18, 2010, 06:41 AM posted in General Discussion

Hi Amanda-  I made a few sentences.  Could you please correct them?  I wrote in parentheses what I was trying to say.

 

1.  Shàng ge zhōumò wǒ gēn zuì hǎo de péngyou dǎ le wǎngqiú.

(Last weekend my friend and I played tennis)

 

2.  Wǒ kàn de shíhou nǐ, wǒ xiào.

(When I see you, I smile)

 

3.  Xiàcì wǒ yào yòu yī zhāng xīn de zhàopiàn.

(Next time I will have a new picture)

 

Thanks!