correction for your sentence

amandali_counselor
May 05, 2010, 03:16 AM posted in General Discussion
Xia(shang) ge xinqi tian, wo de papa he wode mama, dao HK. My parents arrived in HK last Sunday.
 
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foimiaou
May 31, 2010, 09:49 AM

Xiaxue, zhongxue, gaozhong he da xue de shihou wo bu xihuan xuexi. Wo bijiao xihuan ting yinyue, tiaowu he changge. Wo ye xihuan shufa le. Zuijin, wo you xingqu shufa. Yinwei zai xuexi putonghua, wo juede ye yao xuexi shufa.

Wo you ge zhong ge yang de aihao. Danshi wo zui xihuan (paragliding). Ranghuo qihou hen zongyao. Ruguo xiayu, xiaxue, hen da fung, bu neng (paragliding). Name wo ye xihuan kan shu, kan dianying, jiuba he nuhaizhi.

Wo meiyou xingqu youqi xiaqi he huahua.