Can I say this?

dagah

June 18, 2008, 10:23 AM posted in General Discussion

Hi, i'm going to shanghai 28 june-- and if I want to tell the host family when i'm gonna arrive, can I say this?:

我要六月二十八号到上海了.
我期盼着看见你们.

wo3 yao4 liu4 yue4 er4 shi2 ba1 hao4 dao4 shang4 hai3 le. wo3 qi1 pan4 zhe kan4 jian4 ni3 men

"i'm arriving 28 june. i'm looking forward to see you"

Is this correct? Also can I use 期盼(qi1 pan4) like this?

Thanks!

Dag