tasks

xiaomai5
September 24, 2013, 10:34 AM posted in General Discussion

Hi CP,

I haven't had a task feedback for maybe around a week now.. is this because you are all celebrating 中秋节? :)

If so that is absolutely fine!  I was just hoping that my tasks have not been lost as I have sent 3-4 now.

谢谢!

 

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lujiaojie
September 25, 2013, 02:08 AM

xiaomai5,

我都回复了,是不是没收到?哪几个没收到?请告诉我们?

谢谢!

 

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xiaomai5

哎呀!好像我的email address错了。现在我改变了。

可不可以再发我? 谢谢!

Homeworks I am missing are:

Business trip one (出差), monkey show (耍猴), nutritional content labels, renting and Xmas festival one. So five in total! If you can send me again to the corrected email I will be so happy to receive them :) I have corrected my email on the system now.

非常谢谢!

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lujiaojie

我想发给你,但是没有你的email.

I just saw"Sorry, this user has chosen to receive no emails. "

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lujiaojie

nutritional content labels

我看一下,后面上有一个营养成分表。(可以说:我看了一下,后面有一个营养成分表。 “了”表示你看过了,“后面”不需要“上”)

脂肪是……,极高了。(呵呵,极高了像古代汉语,现在我们说:高极了!)

其他的很好!

Business trip

我从没来出差。要说:我从来没出过差。(出差是离合词)

他们中短时间应该看到很多工厂。(这句我不太明白,读起来有点奇怪。)

他们可以报消为机票和酒店。(这句中文的语序要说:他们可以报销机票和酒店的费用。不用“为”)

旅游的时候,我跟家人用skype为了联系。(这句也和英文不一样,可以说:旅游的时候,我跟家人用skype联系。不需要“为了”。)

monkey show

今天写得太好了!没有错误!water light show可以说“水光表演”。

继续努力哦!

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xiaomai5

thank you for all the feeback, I will work through this now. How do I choose to receive emails? Please can you change this? I want to receive emails!! Also there is still two more homeworks on renting and Xmas festival missing. Do you need me to re-send these? Thank you so much :)

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xiaomai5

re the business trip homework...one sentence you said you were not sure what I was trying to say! I wanted to say: They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time. Thank you :)

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connie

Xmas festival,

修改了一下:

在我们国家有一个传统节日是圣诞节。

我们过这个节日的时候,有很大的家庭聚餐(通常是火鸡),还会互相送礼。

这个节日有很多传统,比如说,有些人会站在槲寄生下面亲吻,(和相拉饼干?这个什么?我看不懂哦。)

在这个节日里,公司会给员工发东西,我现在的公司给我发了一张20英镑的礼品卡,我以前的公司给我发了一瓶香槟酒。("员工"的"员"写错了哦,要注意下。)

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connie

renting,

1. 有一次,我要去机场,很急。中国司机很会开车。他开车的技术很好。

2. 因为一些司机会告诉小偷你的家里没人。

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xiaomai5

@ Connie, 非常谢谢发了我两个作业 :)

Just two last questions! In Xmas homework I meant to say "we pull crackers with each other". 怎么说中文? 我写 "饼干" - 很傻了!

还有在出差作业里, 我要说"They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time" - 怎么说中文?

谢谢! 

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xiaomai5

Also Connie I think you make one small mistake.. I was asking about the task feedback for 组房子 but under "renting" you have written about me rushing to the airport?! This was a different task! Do you need me to re-send my 组房子作业? 

谢谢!

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lujiaojie

他们需要在很短的时间内参观很多工厂。

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lujiaojie

好的,重发一次,我们再批改。

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xiaomai5

感谢:)

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lujiaojie
October 03, 2013, 12:31 PM

刚刚批改了你两个tasks,一个”开锁“,一个”租房子“,收到了吗?收到的话请告诉我一下。谢谢!

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xiaomai5

没收到:(

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xiaomai6

我再发了你我的作业,一共六个作业!谢谢!

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lujiaojie

昨天批改了,收到了吗?

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lujiaojie

Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Roommate Hunting

October 1, 2013 from Web

To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie

Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Calling the Locksmith

October 1, 2013 from Web

To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie

这2个没收到?

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lujiaojie

xiaomai6 completed the task for Intermediate » Shaven Dog

1 day ago from Web

To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie

这个收到了吗?

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xiaomai6

Hi:) So, I haven't received lots of homeworks? :(

I am missing:

renting appartment

roommate

shaving dogs

chinese placement

shapes

fleas

I am set-up to receive emails so not sure why it isn't working.

My email is matthew_appleyard@hotmail.com.

Please can you help?

Thanks