tasks
xiaomai5
September 24, 2013, 10:34 AM posted in General DiscussionHi CP,
I haven't had a task feedback for maybe around a week now.. is this because you are all celebrating 中秋节? :)
If so that is absolutely fine! I was just hoping that my tasks have not been lost as I have sent 3-4 now.
谢谢!
xiaomai5
哎呀！好像我的email address错了。现在我改变了。
可不可以再发我? 谢谢!
Homeworks I am missing are:
Business trip one (出差), monkey show (耍猴), nutritional content labels, renting and Xmas festival one. So five in total! If you can send me again to the corrected email I will be so happy to receive them :) I have corrected my email on the system now.
非常谢谢!
lujiaojie
nutritional content labels
我看一下，后面上有一个营养成分表。（可以说：我看了一下，后面有一个营养成分表。 “了”表示你看过了，“后面”不需要“上”）
脂肪是……，极高了。（呵呵，极高了像古代汉语，现在我们说：高极了！）
其他的很好！
Business trip
我从没来出差。要说：我从来没出过差。（出差是离合词）
他们中短时间应该看到很多工厂。（这句我不太明白，读起来有点奇怪。）
他们可以报消为机票和酒店。（这句中文的语序要说：他们可以报销机票和酒店的费用。不用“为”）
旅游的时候，我跟家人用skype为了联系。（这句也和英文不一样，可以说：旅游的时候，我跟家人用skype联系。不需要“为了”。）
monkey show
今天写得太好了！没有错误！water light show可以说“水光表演”。
继续努力哦！
xiaomai5
thank you for all the feeback, I will work through this now. How do I choose to receive emails? Please can you change this? I want to receive emails!! Also there is still two more homeworks on renting and Xmas festival missing. Do you need me to re-send these? Thank you so much :)
xiaomai5
re the business trip homework...one sentence you said you were not sure what I was trying to say! I wanted to say: They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time. Thank you :)
connie
Xmas festival，
修改了一下：
在我们国家有一个传统节日是圣诞节。
我们过这个节日的时候，有很大的家庭聚餐（通常是火鸡），还会互相送礼。
这个节日有很多传统，比如说，有些人会站在槲寄生下面亲吻，（和相拉饼干？这个什么？我看不懂哦。）
在这个节日里，公司会给员工发东西，我现在的公司给我发了一张20英镑的礼品卡，我以前的公司给我发了一瓶香槟酒。（"员工"的"员"写错了哦，要注意下。）
xiaomai5
@ Connie, 非常谢谢发了我两个作业 :)
Just two last questions! In Xmas homework I meant to say "we pull crackers with each other". 怎么说中文? 我写 "饼干" - 很傻了!
还有在出差作业里, 我要说"They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time" - 怎么说中文?
谢谢!
xiaomai5
Also Connie I think you make one small mistake.. I was asking about the task feedback for 组房子 but under "renting" you have written about me rushing to the airport?! This was a different task! Do you need me to re-send my 组房子作业？
谢谢！
lujiaojie
他们需要在很短的时间内参观很多工厂。
lujiaojie
好的，重发一次，我们再批改。
xiaomai5
感谢：）
lujiaojie
October 03, 2013, 12:31 PM刚刚批改了你两个tasks,一个”开锁“，一个”租房子“，收到了吗？收到的话请告诉我一下。谢谢！
xiaomai5
没收到:(
xiaomai6
我再发了你我的作业，一共六个作业！谢谢！
lujiaojie
昨天批改了，收到了吗？
lujiaojie
Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Roommate Hunting
October 1, 2013 from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Calling the Locksmith
October 1, 2013 from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
这2个没收到？
lujiaojie
xiaomai6 completed the task for Intermediate » Shaven Dog
1 day ago from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
这个收到了吗？
xiaomai6
Hi:) So, I haven't received lots of homeworks? :(
I am missing:
renting appartment
roommate
shaving dogs
chinese placement
shapes
fleas
I am set-up to receive emails so not sure why it isn't working.
My email is matthew_appleyard@hotmail.com.
Please can you help?
Thanks
lujiaojie
September 25, 2013, 02:08 AMxiaomai5,
我都回复了，是不是没收到？哪几个没收到？请告诉我们？
谢谢！